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Old 07-30-2008, 02:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
Decadent
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Sorry to hear about your job situation.

Well, you definitely don't sell crap. I see a few piece I'd like to pick up when I can. The bikinis in particular are adorable, and the live models are a nice touch.

However, the build is a little too impersonal and prefab, with no personalized touches that I can see. The photography on some of the ads is also a little flat, selling the clothes short somewhat -- you have older skins and hair in some photos, which jars with the newer, sleeker looks in others.

Maybe re-shoot some of your ads and find a build that's more you, and a little less open? You could save space by offering one shirt with multiple colors in vendors as opposed to all colors side by side in one big block, which would allow you leeway to look into downsizing into a more personal, boutiquey build.
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